As we wait at the threshold of Imbolc, marked and celebrated in the first days of February, we await the arising (in her maiden aspect) of the Triple Goddess Brighe; later St Brigid, Bridie; the dedicatee of Brides-wort (meadowsweet, Filipendula ulmaria).
Tonight my dVerse poetry friend Kim in north Norfolk encourages us – and you perhaps, dear reader? = to focus on lists of words issued on opthalamists’ “Can you read this?” charts, to select some groups (my choices are below in bold) and to include them in the given order in poetry of any form.
nose – one – cause – even
were – crone – our – summer
name – use – means – arose
near – can – remove – sure
crow – verse – see – renew
assume – once- van – sum
aware – caves – sea – cream
Kim writes: Your challenge is to choose one or two sets of words and write a poem using them in the order in which they appear. If you’re feeling particularly inspired, you could use all of the words. You can write in any form you wish, but I imagine haiku or tanka would be interesting for one or two sets, and a range of forms for more.
awaiting the maiden goddess: Imbolc
when we were pregnant - crone in our summer days
of Godyssey, whoredom, motherhood -
the names we chose to use became
the means by which we (Rose) arose
to hawk with Crow, to wedge with Raven -
to spread verse on the wingèd sky, and see
the place upon my sleeve where might renew
the Moth of which became aware as, in the
first of caves, sea-dreampt St Bridie dear,
blessing the teats of her Cow and the Ewe
and making butter from their cream
© Kathy Labrum McVittie 28 January 2024

Love the idea, and the poem. I can feel the stirrings of the Goddes and February draws close.
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Yes, She rises! Last January 2024 I called on Brighid in a moment of need, and She responded. ❤
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Wow, Kathy, this is an inspired poem! I love the lines:
‘to hawk with Crow, to wedge with Raven –
to spread verse on the wingèd sky…’
and the way you used internal rhyme and wove mythology into your poem.
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Thanks Kim! I had to write to this prompt! It took me back to 2019, to a real cave – near where I live in summer – where a hawkmoth-sized beauty did indeed alight onto my sleeve, where it rested for several minutes, like a blessing.
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My pleasure, Kathy. I love those wow moments.
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I love the mythology woven into your poem!
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I’m delighted that you say this; thank you. The Goddess/Irish Saint Brighid is so inspiring a guide to me and I’ve written about her elsewhere .
I also have a (metaphoric) thing about weaving, basket-making, textiles!
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Perfection. Every word. I just finished making my Brigid’s cross this morning, so happy Imbolc, Kathy.
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Your comment makes me feel very contented. I haven’t yet managed to make a successful Brigid’s cross but I do write about her, and to her, instead!
May you have peace and joy in her gentle coming, Misky.
https://writingpresence.com/2024/02/05/rites-and-routines-7-celebrating-imbolc-brighids-day/
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And to you.
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I was going to say exactly what crazy4yarn2 said so I will just add “Hear, hear!”
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Ah thank you Judy!
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Really very much like the pagan world you’ve brought to life in your swirling verse.
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Thank you for saying that. Since 2020 my journey through things Celtic and earthy has really been a comfort to me, particularly during breast cancer treatment and the grief healing that accompanies it. See poetic challenge from dVerse 10: cancer-dancer – writingpresence
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Thank you for your link …very relevant to me…
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❤
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So much woven into this story… many of which are unknown to me, but the mythic parts really spoke to me of ancient times.
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Thank you friend Bjorn! This may fill you in a little, from this time last year:
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Kathy, I like the sacred atmosphere you conjure here.
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Thank you for noticing that, Lisa. What with the WoodSnake and the Awakening Goddess, the year is opening up just so.
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❤
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As always your verse so beautifully weaves mythology and rituals to create a bucolic setting that makes one sigh…
Happy Imbolc, Kathy.
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Beautifully written, Kathy!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Thank you!
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Rich with imagery, tradition, myth: I especially love this line, Kathy —
“o hawk with Crow, to wedge with Raven” —
What a mystical invocation!
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Last year I wrote a poetic cyle based on a threefold year ruled by the Goddess in her aspects of Brigit (Imbolc), Lugh’s mother Trograin (Lugnasa) and the Cailleach (Samhain to Yule)) One has to dig pretty far and wide to excavate even traces of the old agricultural myth, but you’re welling a fertile source here. Here’s to milking the ewes in the buttery of verse!
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Intrigued by your emplacement of these Brighid aspects, within the Wheel of the Year. Did you find a sympatico publisher?
Likewise I locate Her/them as maiden/virgin and mother/whore and crone/hag, with something of a blur from Her/their/my shadows, Cailleach and Baba Yaga.
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Self published – https://www.blurb.com/b/12342694-tides-vol-1-spring-and-summer-tides
and
https://www.blurb.com/b/12342699-tides-vol-2-fall-and-winter-tides
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