Merril posts today’s prosery challenge from dVerse, asking us to incorporate – as is – the line: “where can we find light in this never-ending shade?”
from Amanda Gorman, “The Hill We Climb”
The Workhouse
The fixed sky has slummed over the town for too long, and the coal-smoke, and the fumes of charred pulses are trapped between the layers of smog and drizzle. Shawls bent over shopping baskets, the cracked old leather purse barely empty. Old School lording it over Technical College.
Eighteen-sixteen was the Year without a Summer, and I enquire into your whereabouts, grandparents’ grannies, or John Clare (poet) aged nineteen, or my yet unmet ancestor spirit guides.
Afraid of reverting to The Welfare; the back-to-back with one privy, eight homes; the Victoria Almshouse; the Mill Road Workhouse, founded 1838. Better to to ask again the question: where can we find light?
In this never-ending shade, there’s a movement at last: the clouds part, and through the crack filter the motes of sunshine, faltering and hesitating like the Song Thrush at the Gate to the Garden.
© Kathy Labrum McVittie 21 Jan 2024

The year without summer, the constant coal smoke (and fog), and the long work hours–I’m sure some never saw the light. Lovely final line.
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I’m so happy I didn’t live during those times. Great prosery, Kathy!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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This is such an evocative and atmospheric piece, Kathy! The historical depth and vivid imagery create such a haunting yet hopeful journey.
Much love,
David
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Thank you David! Your words and critique (?) are very encouraging and give me eagerness towards a new poetry sharing project… Sending love to you and your family x
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Very poignant, Kathy, and thought provoking! Love your reference to John Clare. Love, Liz x
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And just imagine how we even today would have massive starvation in the wake of a massive volcanic eruption-
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Even today… Yes.
I’m fascinated how much the Mount Tambora eruption in present-day Indonesia affected not only harvests globally but also the literary and art scene. Wet weather in Europe, and Frankenstein’s monster is born…
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Year_Without_a_Summer&action=edit§ion=0
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I grew up south of Pittsburgh, PA in coal and coke country. Coke ovens burn just over the hill a mile or two from our house. When they were all lit up the smoke clouds filled the skies. I can understand the meaning of this prompt that you so aptly wrote about. Where is the light in all this shade!
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my mum’s family grew up in Birmingham, England – “the Black Country “. So much coal-mining…
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