De Jackson (aka WhimsyGizmo) at dVerse Poets Pub has prompted us to write and publish our own quadrille – a poem of exactly 44 words – this time including a version of the word “pinch”.
It’s been a long (and lovely) day so this, in brief, is my quick attempt to quaddle, befor I waddle off to my bed.
Pinch points
'Pinch me lest I'm dreaming'
When first our fingers met,
As dawn began to leak its show
Of gold. O you were tender then.
Pinch me, 'cos I'm scheming
To get away before
The bitter tea-leaves rearrange
As death-watch beetles:
Yours, mine, the Planet's
© Kathy Labrum McVittie 22 Jan 2024

This is absolutely stunning! I especially admire this part; “As dawn began to leak its show of gold. O you were tender then.” 🩷🩷
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Thank you dear Sanaa; you have helped me to smile as I wake up this morning – dawn being grey and pink today in readiness for Storm Jocelyn nere in UK
(Jocelyn Bell Burnell and I were at the same Cambridge college, a decade apart.)
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Kathy, this is a lovely piece enjoyed from start to finish…but I think my favorite thing of all is your handing us the verb “quaddle” for writing a Quadrille. Oh, YES. 😉
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Kathy, love the “quaddle before the waddle.”
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bless you! I slept well in the end, despite having stayed up Too Late to post my quadrille. Sending love
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I can relate to that. I het the prompts only at 9 PM local time.
Lovely what you produced, I really like to.
The whole part is poetic: “quaddle, befor I waddle”
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Thank you kindly! I love the sound of words in my mouth…
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❤
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Nicely done quadrille.
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Maybe no pinch since the scheming may lead to something better
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Alas… too often what is good ends (sometimes just because of fear that it will not last)
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Alas – been there, done that… but the dawn was delightful while it lasted!
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Kathy,
Your reference to death-watch beetles adds an intriguing layer of reflection on the transient nature of time and relationships!
~David
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Again – you’ve “got” this David, and you’ve “got” me!
PS Rule 1: Never use the word ‘GOT’
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That was a surprise ending!
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Such a contrast in the two stanzas–I wasn’t expecting that!
“as death-watch beetles”–what an image.
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Thank you for expressing your double-take, Merrill. The force of my sentiments took me by surprise too – a volte-face during the writing of only 44 words – although I did start with 63!
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You’re welcome. Sometimes the muse takes over. 😉
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.😉 (-:
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So much said here in just a few lines, on a couple of different levels but both how good is transformed into the bitter. So well done, Kathy.
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Thank you dear Dora; yes I tend to ramble through many levels and sometimes lose my way… Now where was I?
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😄
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Excellent 🙌
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Thanks for the loud applause!
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