Last year, lost love Milk-cow-maiden among the muses, never far from pensive mood. Even closer rumbled heather-bees. From Sochan summit the long bay, sweeping the roundhouse. Room among the stars then for the capricious centaur of love's arrows. This year's a different thing. I'll not think on you. Where did you go, Brighid? Did you expend your largesse under the hibernian reign of the Cailleadh? Did you hunker down perhaps among the humble, losing yourself in the modest haunts of the phoenix' ashen bones? Did you go to earth with Lumbricus terrestris, with slither slime and slip under the charred remains of hillsides? The snow the frost and the craze of frozen rain lodged in my heart until I was a broken totem, iced to the core and ravenous, without appetite except for excoriation. I eliminated you from my demesne, as so much shat out, excessive and extreme. Copyright Kathy Labrum McVittie 13 February 2023
Merril, writing from dVerse Poets Pub, invites us on Prosery Monday thus:
“Prosery can be flash-fiction or creative non-fiction, but it is short prose no longer than 144 words in total (not including the title). It must be prose, not poetry (no versification, line breaks, meter, etc), and most importantly, it must include the given poetry line, word for word, within the prose. You may break the line and add punctuation, but you cannot change the words in the line or insert words”
HERE IS THE PROSERY PROMPT LINE:
“This year’s a different thing, –
I’ll not think of you.”from Charlotte Mew (1869-1928): “I so liked Spring”
Nicely done. Great images in your story.
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Thank you for your enjoyment!
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Lovely, Kathy. I especially like ‘The snow the frost and the craze of frozen rain lodged in my heart until I was a broken totem, iced to the core and ravenous’ – it made me gasp!
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Thank you Kim – this meme of the Snow Queen’s power (mercifully only temporary) over poor Kay – until Gerda thaws his heart through her love – has been a recurring one for me this winter. And there was a thick frost here this morning!
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The Snow Queen is a story I come back to often.
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I enjoyed your poetic language, Kathy. I’m not familiar enough with the myths, but I got the gist of it. I hope it warms up where you are.
We’re having a very mild winter, aside from some very cold days around Christmas.
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Deep writing of a dark inner landscape. Winter does like to mess with our minds I’ve learned.
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Thank you for your perceptiveness. My soul is beginning to sing again after a long winter. I hope and trust that yours too is beginning to stretch its wings xxx
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You are welcome, and yes, the sun has been shining on multiple days over the past week, which does wonders for soul singing.
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