Tonight’s challenge from Mish at dVerse Poets’ Pub is to write a poem of exactly forty-four words, sharp with ICE.
Remembering the Snow Queen’s life-numbing grip of my own old heart recently, I was drawn, chilled, or spelled to mention her. (She was immortalised by Hans Christian Andersen and has appeared in many films and ballet performances.)
And then to my sparkling delight I found a photo that my college friend Carol had sent me from Charlecote Park. It’s a National Trust property in the English Midlands, where the Ice Queen and her sinister throng had passed by just before Christmas.
Ice Queen, Kay, Kathy
In his heart a wedgèd splice.
She was wanton; was not nICE;
she: destruction of the soul –
frozen Kay is on parole
till sweet Gerda’s tears elute
evil witch’s chill repute –
Prithee, soul friend, wilt thou thaw
with compassion my (c)old core?
© Kathy Labrum McVittie 23 January 2023
An interesting piece. Nicely done quadrille.
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Thank you!
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Wow, Kathy – just – wow. I really enjoyed this! And very nICE use of the word “ice” 😉
❤
David
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Thank you for allowing my cheat, David.
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😉 what cheat? I didn’t see any cheat! 😉
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You capture the scene and era well here . What an intriguing image for inspiration!
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I loved your creativity! There was great word-play here!
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Thank you, Colleen
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I still remember reading HC Anderssen as a kid… yes and that shard that had to be melted away
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Beautiful image to get the muse dancing. It’s good to know that there are those who carry the flames that can melt the shards.
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That’s what I am putting my trust in. Thank you for bringing your candle to the party, soul-friend!
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