Sarahsouthwest from dVerse poets pub suggested a Tuesday poem about one of the Four Elements.
Elements that I know in the Wheel of the Year as ‘Earth in the north, Air in the east, Fire in the south and Water in the west’
I knew exactly what poem I had to share, so as not to follow the rules too closely.
Earth and Water, released by Fire (whether of combustion or respiration) into the Air.
I had to broadcast to you, readers, ‘my mother’s molecules’, just as they were from a crematorium chimney in north Wales in early November 1986, after her untimely death from breast cancer aged 69. Only nine years after her first-born, my sister Carole, died aged 38 from cancer that had probably had its roots in the breast cancer for which she had been treated at University Hospital in Cardiff in 1974.
My mother however had not accepted medical treatment, relying instead on spiritual healing (she was an adherent of Christian Science, the religious affiliation in which I was raised). She asked us not to disclose her illness and dying to her friends.
It was massively difficult for me to break the news of her death to people who had admired and loved her, and were puzzled and angry that she had maintained a wall of privacy and secrecy, A wall which as the youngest daughter – last one to fledge – I had previously experienced at home, the most recently.
I am still living with the psychological fallout of that time, and that is why I chose to be so open about my own diagnosis and surgery earlier this year.
And perhaps why I am struggling to maintain a mature approach to self-advocacy over my ongoing treatment. Healing, at all levels – somatic, emotional, psychic – is a complicated process, especially when the role-modelling in childhood and early adulthood has been so complex.
Here then: ‘My mother’s molecules’, written in the 1990s when my father Eric had died too, and we (my mini-family of me in my forties, my singleton child, my husband) were living on the northeast coast of England, close to the North Sea at Druridge Bay, which is referenced in the third stanz
My mother's molecules Two months after the funeral we stand by the sea at Rhyl without her. Concrete walls restrain us; the steps and sand and clutter are far below. My mothers’ molecules have moved from her cremated body into the barometric sky, and have rained down, into the darkening sea. They murmur, roll and peal upon the sand. I’m glad to see her part of this; can be alongside now, without the careful dialogue. Seven years pass, and my conversation is - at last - with myself. Reaching the edge of Druridge dunes, I stand, then kick-run, chaotic, to the flat shelf of the moister sand. I’m not the woman I once was. My atoms come and go; I feed, I breathe... I trickle out into the waterways that reach the sea. I look out, over, vastly; review myself across the water; see whoever I once was, mingling (as round the globe the seas all meet) with my mother’s molecules. © Kathy Labrum McVittie 1993
I found this very moving and thought-provoking. Thank you for sharing it here.
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You provided the ethereal space for me to release it into – thank you Sarah!
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Ommigosh, Kathy – this is so raw and simply amazing. This is what poetry should be… I’m so touched.
❤
David
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I was thinking of you David when I let this go. You know more of her, Lecky 1917-1986, already, through your generous hosting of ‘Dark Yellow’. This poetic catharsis is so important and timely for my own healing. May you too be eased x
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This is a heart felt poem. I appreciate your openness about the health issues and death of your family. Good luck on your journey!
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Profound writing. Great poem.
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My wife’s family and mine have both been whittled down by premature death, gut failure, dementia and cancer: each loss carries those “family molecules” on a world wind that comes back and goes on. That story is the tale here, of the heart which mediates all the elements through love, yearning and loss. Well done and amen.
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Brendan I honour your losses and I thank you for your words of comfort. I recognise what you say about love, yearning and loss. Their ache is easier to accommodate when shared with kindred companions, as in this community.
I love what you have released into the Winds here. Yes we breathe in the presence of Great Spirit, we breathe out gift and let go.
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So moving, Kathy, your poem made me envious, as I had no ashes to scatter – my half-sister saw to that. The alliterative phrase ‘my mother’s molecules’ made me hum in understanding and sympathy. I like the ‘barometric sky’ and the list of three: ‘murmur, roll and peal upon the sand’. The second half of the poem is so familiar, living on the North Norfolk coast and knowing that feeling of atoms coming and going. And what a poignant ending.
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Thank you Kim for your empathy , for sharing your own sadness, and for humming along with the m-words. (Humming is something I do, apparently, when I am pottering about contentedly – my family are happy when A Hum returns after a spell of low mood.)
Please give my love to the wide Norfolk skies, all the way from northern Scotland where I am now. May you, we feel at one with the Earth and skies, sea and sunshine.
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So very moving, Kathy. I found some hope in the last stanza, as in everything is connected. I’m sorry for your loss(es), even though they are from years ago, we don’t forget.
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Thank you Merril. It has felt a release, albeit a painful one, to resurrect this poem. And it has felt as if I have been gathered up in forgiving and comforting arms, arms of understanding and compassion for messy grievings, and it’s time to move on under new skies, ever changing, and let go the losses on the wind . Blessings and hope to you .
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You’re welcome. 💙
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Such a moving and lyrical poem thanks for sharing.
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thank you so much – “lyrical” delights me!
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So touching ❤️
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thank you for reading – and for sharing your warm heart, Lesley!
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Once again your poem on grief is very beautiful, how do you do it?
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This was from a long time ago – one of the little booklet I self-published. Gradually introducing some to my webpage …
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Kathy, thank you for sharing such a moving write. It is cathartic not just for the writer but the reader too..
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Thank you Punam for this affirmation. I hope the read is cathartic in a good way. My forename Kathryn comes from Catherine which is translated as ‘pure’… sometimes I sign off as ‘Cathartica’… there is a shrub called Rhamnus cathartica, purging buckthorn, the food plant for one of my favourite butterflies, the Brimstone … the male butterfly is sulphur yellow, and perhaps that’s why butterflies in general got their name, from Butter-coloured…
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For me cathartic is always in a good way. You are welcome.
And thank you once again for sharing about your name and how butterflies may have got their name! Truly fascinating.
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I love this moving and beautiful poem Kathy. Seeing your mother’s molecules released into the barometric sky, and mingling then in turn with your own. Such a powerful image and way of the elements linking.
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Thank you Jo. We are all connected x
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