Björn Rudberg has set this jolly Valentine’s Challenge to those idling their time at dVerse Poet’s Pub: Write a piece of prose that incorporates the given set of words and they have to come in exactly the order given, but you may break it up with punctuation. The maximum number of words is 144 (which is a gross) including the given line: It is a moon wrapped in brown paper penned by Carol Anne Duffy
So here is my dream-scape, dedicated to a self-confessed romantic who doesn’t celebrate “all this Valentine malarkey”, so I am doing “it for him ‘cos his throat is rather sore” (A A Milne, ‘Binker’ in ‘Now we are six’, Methuen, 1927
It is a moon wrapped in brown paper that today he has gifted me, as a playmate. Luna framed in a recyclable Pierrot’s ruff, concertina pleated like the smile lines around his sad happy clown’s eyes. I don’t yet know what colour are those eyes; I’ve still not had a chance to gaze (within a gasp’s compass) into them, nor — after That Breathless Once — upon his gibbous moon countenance, though we did encounter as (s)elves briefly in a magic drum journey, him grimacing beside the Fae, I so wary of my Edge. So afraid of toppling the tightrope, down tumbling off the cliff, spread-eagled, as in my mother’s dream, upon the sand below. She fears for my maidenhood; still marshals my Train of Thought, in the Sidings and Station-yards of all the Railways near to which I’ve been born, become wed, chosen my grave.
Hilarious even if I found a tinge of sad. Lovd the mother’s dream.
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Thank you for finding both the hilarity and the tinge. You have rightly divined that the mother’s dream is the hinge point, the fulcrum, for this uneasy balancing… Wish me goddess-speed along my wobbly edge! (Triple goddess, assimilated as St Brighid, patron of poetrry, healing and (word)smiths}
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“gibbous moon countenance” an inspired line.
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Thank you – it’s an inspiring face upon which I wish to gaze again…
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A tumbling tale, full, rich, described in a stream of consciousness…very nice style, and tone…
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Thank you, I nod humbly and earnestly in your lucid praise,fellow hermit …
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I love this, Kathy!
-David [ben Alexander]
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Thank you kindly David; I used “full-moon face” for the same Muse, in an essay I wrote (as Pan Piper) for Synkroniciti Magaizine 3.2
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Wonderful writing, and Happy Valentines Day!
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Thank you Rob; its great to hear so many positive responses, though none from the Muse (of malarkey) himself…
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It sounds like the mother is right to have some concerns.
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Oh shucks, not another voice of censure! There I was hoping to fly to the moon before supper … 😉
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