As if reading the Hive Mind, Kim from dVerse Poets delights us this morning with opening words from three poems by Philip Larkin, and invites us also to pen our own poems from opening hook-up lines.
What better than re-using Philip Larkin’s opener to his “The Trees”, which was not only giifted to me by a writing student several years ago (on a scrap of paper cut out with pinking shears) but has also underewritten my thoughts all through The Spring Opening this 2025, culminating in May Day tomorrow.
Thank you Kim, thank you Sara, thank you Red Kite of inspiration, guidance and wisdom.
Larkin' about
The trees are coming into leaf
Like something almost being said;
I want you, dear, beyond belief
And sometimes will that you were dead.
Oftimes I wish that I could take
More lightly what we have to share:
A septic tick bite by the lake;
A quiver on my shoulder bare.
On thermals I rise up to soar,
And lately you have come to me,
Red Kite, as scavenging for more
Than blossom of the Linden tree.
Copyright © Kathy Labrum McVittie 30 April 2025

I love that start…. if gives such a precise place and time, and then the imagery of the birds spring just adds to it all. (Love the title)
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Larkin has such a grasp of the specific versus the universal, doesn’t he?
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A great use of that Larkin opening.
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Thank you Kim – even though I misquoted it at first as [something] “understood” rather that “almost said”… Of course it rhymes better when corrected!
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I’m glad you found time to lark about with Larkin’s trees and link up with us at the Poets Pub, Kathy. What a wonderful gift to receive from a student, too. I smiled at the septic tick bite by the lake, and love the appearance of the red kite.
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Packing up my computer for the train, horrified to see your lovely comment had gone into SPAM! The firt time that’s happened to me…
I am glad to retrieve you… and thank you again for your bathng me in Larkin’s green and golden light on a nearly-May-Day.
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from a Larkin to a linden – quite the journey, with bites to boot :). Thanks for reading and for the subscription ~ M
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Thank you kindly x
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Love how the opening lines sparked the rhythm of your verses. How lovely to see the blossom of the Linden tree. Happy May 1st to you.
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I have spent early May in the English Midlands among magnificent Lindens x 😊🌳
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yet another poem that left me feeling dreamy! loved it. ❤
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Delighted by your response Ren – happy to oblige!
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Beautiful poetry!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Thank you Yvette! 😊
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Gorgeous, gorgeous use of the Larkin opening! ❤️❤️
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