*
as
a child
I read a
book about a sad
fir tree who did not
change hue of leaf in fall
but kept its green twigs fresh:
so by mid-winter its joy-
* value as living spirit of *
the forest was acclaimed by the wood-
man, his wife and children (oh yes, them most!)
and they
all sang
© Kathy Labrum McVittie 5 December 2024
Written in response to a challenge from Laura of dVerse Poets. She asked that we include a seasonal fir tree (or suchlike) in a poem in which the syllables per line increase from one to ten, with optional doubles at the end to form the trunk. I added some twinkles too.
‘Fir tree etheree’ challenge from dVerse
framed poster, displayed fireside from 45 years of marriage, photo image first acquired for £0.60 in The Leigh Gallery, Kings Parade, Cambridge in the 1970s.

I love this Kathy! The poor fir tree who wanted to change colors like all the other trees. What a cool concept for a storybook. This time of year I’m very thankful for the green of the fir trees and even threw some lights up on one!
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Yes, it was a beautiful little 1950s storybook belong to one of my big sisters. Even as I read it again and again to myself, I guess I was anticipating my lifelong deep love for trees – both deciduous and coniferous – and my growing connection with the (Celtic, shamanic) Earth Path.
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And I wanted to add that your framed poster is my kind of wall art!!!
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I am so glad you said! Sharing it here is a kinda elegy for its history in my life (in four long-term homes plus undergraduate and graduate roomings). I’m now feeling ready to offer it to my husband when (not if) we finalise our separation.
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Noble verse and I love the beneficence of it.
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What a great word is that “benificence”, Li – thank you for that twinkle on this stormy evening (when a wild wind tatters the ivy around the draughty window)
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You’re welcome, Kathy. The wind is pitchin a fit here also.
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stay safe and warm x
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I love your twinkles and this beautiful, thoughtful poem. Books from childhood remain forever in our memory banks … especially the books that resonated. Cheers.
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Bravo – such a joyful rendition of the evergreen as etheree
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I felt happiness and contentment in retrieving this memory from the forest of my heart-mind.
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Your warm smile, as you wrote this, shines through your words, Kathy. What a lovely story. Thanks for sharing the framed poster… priceless!
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Ah Punam! You know me… And I am on my way to that house (where the poster lives) this very afternoon…
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How wonderful…
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A joyful and lovely message. Thank you for sharing!
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Clever idea and yes a great storyline perhaps. The form is interesting too.
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Thank you kindly! The form was prompted by dVersepoets.com
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Lovely 💓
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