My friend Kim from north Norfolk, UK, recently interviewed for dVerse Poets Pub the accomplished poet Sarah Connor, who is on the palliative care pathway in her life.
As a tribute and support to Sarah and her family we are invited to share poetry that we have drawn from a selection of Sarah’s own well-crafted words.
For my attempt at this, I took as my first line (slightly re-ordered) this very beautiful line, reflective of the plantswoman in each of Sarah, Kim and myself, from Sarah’s work ‘The Art of Cutting Back’.
From ‘The Art of Cutting Back’:
“We write our poems, verses clear as gin,
and cool as ice, compact as cherry stones:
This is our craft; we cut, we prune, we thin.“
Sarah Connor
As you’ll see, it grew in a different direction, without my bidding. I share it hesitantly, and with gentle love to Sarah and her family.
the beautiful scars
This is our craft: we prune, we cut, we thin;
we make decisions, marking Out and In -
though others chide us, ultimately we
determine what is Other, what belongs to Me
Yet as we grow, and ripen, and perfect -
basking in afternoons of intellect -
we open to collective laughter, free
ourselves into the stalwart of Community
We stand in Circle, at the close of play,
in recognition of the tender way
life's a rehearsal both for valid Grief
and also Grace, with Joy beyond belief
© Kathy Labrum McVittie 25 July 2024

Kathy, I am honoured to be your friend, and delighted that you linked up your ‘beautiful scars’, and joined us in our tribute to Sarah. The line you chose is a great springboard into a poem, and I love where it took you. I agree that we ‘determine what is Other, what belongs to Me’ and then ‘grow, and ripen, and perfect…into the stalwart of Community’, making this poem also a tribute to our online poets’ community.
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Thank you dear Kim for your validation.I feel very moved x
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You’re most welcome. x
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This is as beautiful to read Kathy as it’s beautifully written. It strikes a deep chord with me. Thank you. X
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Thank you dear Jo. Thinking of you this morning x
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